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[Freak : Prelude (Ep. 1)]

GO QC !!

Once again, the talent of QCers rise and shine !!
Tout simplement extraordinaire. You just made NG's collection twice better. The scene when he walks in the hallway is amazing.

[SUPER DBZ (better)]

Stepping over the last one...

Graphics :
ok, good imitation. Nothing extrordinary but still very decent.

Style:
Pretty much the same as graphics.

Sound:
This is what I liked the most. It gives the personality to your movie and is so well choosen.
Its a very refreshing change from the crappy techno loops.

Violence:
Your lack of graphic quality killed it: I cant see anything.

Interactivity:
Nothing to say there.

Humor:
The music made it fun. Also your drawing makes the characters look childish so its kinda funy.

Overall : Not a bad moovie. However I know you can do a lot better than this. The fact that there was no story is never a problem for DBZ, but the lack of voices and sound effects made it less interesting.

[The Egg]

well, gotta be honest.

it suck, but its

FUNNY AS HELL !!!! I LOVE IT!

[Bored Kids - We are Bored]

WOW Excellent!

I loved the intro! That is so creative!
Very good Drawing and well animated. I especially loved the humor, relaxed and funky.
You got tallent man, and probably a top 50 spot.

ADD SOME MUSIC !!!!!

[Choccy Whitehead]

Nice western style!!

in fact, I prefered the credits to the movie itself! That cowboy thing is really fun and nice to see. However there are too many characters in a so short movie so you lost me somewhere...like, why is that happening?? who are theses guys??

Technically, I think your drawing is good, but some sound was awfull, especially the shouting.

GOOD JOB!!

AGandPJ responds:

Hey, thanks for the review.

To clear it up, this was SUPPOSED To be an advertisement for a college project. we added credits and about a minute of extra footage for NG, but because of the nature of it being an advert in an advertisement CAMPAIGN, there would have to be 3 adverts (we only had to do 1 for college), which would all follow one path (which is why not much is explained in CW). WEll anyway, Choccy Whitehead is a hero who protects his chocolate (Choccy Whitehead Bars being the product being advertised), and the other guys are the enemies. Theres 'Sille' (the criminal Mastermind), theres the 'Shadow Man'(just a crazy old guy who works for Sille) and the rest of the thugs.

The reason the sound is a little iffy is because of the TERRIBLE Microphone i have. sorry bout that.

We're making a sequel already with more background info on all the characters, and hopefully better sound (if i can find a new mic).

Thanks again for the review

-PJ

[Save the World]

I love that humor!!

Its completely retarded and is sarcastic toward the ''save a life today'' comercials. I love that!!

[a lovely day]

only mistake is:

its not a Mazurka, its Chopin's minute waltz. I know for I played it a couple of years ago :)

Otherwise I liked it, the style is very original and the music fits V. well

[Tennis (nes)]

you obviously dont know...

...how to play tennis. The service is always CROSSED, so he should shoot at his left.
Otherwise its crap.

[The NEW unfinished Jhonny]

I loved the 3D

That was the best part. If you finish it, its definetly going to be great. Good music/you need a preloader/storyline have to be improoved from non-existent to minimum.

Exellent potential movie.